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Once again, I've got to say this is pretty awesome for you. All the lines look fine, like the one exception being Sunny's eyebrows since you said they were meant to be different. And the coloring is fine too. Heck, you even gave that robot a shiny head! As far as I can tell you fulfilled all your purposes with this drawing, as you pretty much always do by my keen eye. At this point, I have to figure the only person who can tell you what you did wrong is you, since you know what you wanted to do in the first place.
Hope that was satisfactory, and good luck in the future.
8/10
Yes, I also think this is basically what I wanted; other than more evident shading. That would've been nice, but it took long enough just colouring it the way it is, haha. But yeah, I can see little things that I myself know I have to improve on, so maybe asking for a critique on this one was a bit redundant.
But your attention to detail is always appreciated! So thanks, dude!
Also, expected moonface to be cheese yellow in color.
Huh really? That might actually be kinda cool. . .