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April 13, 2012
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OK the ball should start rolling now I think, part 2 was maybe a little slow, but trust me absolutely necessary!

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~ayyk92 Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Conflict!

Where's the "ding" in the bottom panel coming from? He's holding the phone on the right but the sound effect and his eyes are looking left...
The principal's taller than the door! :O
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~Hobo-Rooster Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A bit* confusing. Anyway I guess what it comes down to is I'm a noob at comics? Haha.
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~ayyk92 Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh, the bottom panels sort of imply he's still walking outside when he gets the message.

Just remember tiny details, they'll help make the surroundings and reactions more believable~ The "ughhh" face was a good touch for example.
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~Hobo-Rooster Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah... it didn't make sense to write "at home" or something in the corner, I guess I shoulda drawn him walking toward a house in that walking panel? What do you think?

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind!
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~ayyk92 Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naw, that part's okay. The bottom panels should get some indication that he's already indoors though, either the computer poking from the side of the panel or pictures/posters hanging on the wall behind in the background. Those would work pretty well I think :D
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~Hobo-Rooster Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahh right, yeah something like that would be a good idea. Not sure why I didn't think of it :\
Thanks for the tips, man.
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~Hobo-Rooster Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a big confusing but I didn't know what else to do. In those bottom two panels, he's at home. The ding comes from his computer... I forgot that before, I had a little thing attached to those chattrbox message boxes that indicated where the sound was coming from... :|
And the background is kind of farther back, y'know? Principal's in the foreground.
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~empatheticRecluse Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D:
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~sophisticatedcow Apr 13, 2012
Why would you do this?! The suspense is making me want to rip my ovaries out...
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~Hobo-Rooster Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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